The main proplem of the paper is; when you read it, you understand the idea but the proplem is with the writing tools.
Grammer is awful.
Using of these words in wrong position; however, moreover, furthermore
Formatting is wrong … i will upload the instructions for the formatting.. do you see the head-notes of the instruction file ? i want it exactly, also you have to modify the cover page and make it exactly like the the example given
Section 3.1.2.1 Foodborne infections; need to be summarized because it’s lengthy.
Also you have to write these sections :

4.3 City Health Problems
Control

4.3.1 Foodborne infection
control

4.3.2 Hepatitis A control

Have a look at this interview:

you will find that all information from this video is used in the following sections:

4.2.1 Preliminary treatment

4.2.2 Secondary treatment

4.2..3 Tertiary treatment

Conclusion

All you have to do is catching the information and do in-text citation for it and reference it in the reference list. The interview was on 14/2/2013 by Mohammed AlGhawi .. theinterviewedis Jassim AlGhawi

Finally, you have to do the outline again.. exactly like the instructions file but in numbers not roman and update the page number in the outline and in illustrations. Also you need to check the in-text citation to reference it in the reference list. I will give you the URL used so you can reference everything. Actually, i did somereferencingbut you will do the rest (:

This paper have to look new to me (: it looks so aweful