Analyze the content of the above diagram.
In a 500 words long, write an essay describing the information shown below.
Your essay should contain the following:
Topic Sentence
A body of the paragraph describing how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
Concluding sentence
Use appropriate transition signals in your writing.
Your paragraph will be evaluated using the rubric on page
RUBRIC FOR PART B
CATEGORY
WEIGHT
LOW
1
FAIR
2
ABOVE AVERAGE
3
EXECELLENT
4
MARKS
TOPIC SENTENCE
1
The topic sentence does not introduce the topic or it may not be a complete sentence or has not been included.
The topic sentence is not clear and/or it is not apparent.
The topic sentence states the topic and/or the focus of the paragraph.
The topic sentence clearly and effectively states the topic and the focus of the paragraph.
4
BODY OF PARAGRAPH
2
The information does not aid the reader in understanding the topic. The process is not explained clearly. There are many confusing elements in the paragraph.
The main idea is not clear, and there is a seemingly random collection of information that does not aid in the understanding of the process being discussed.
The main idea is somewhat clear but the supporting information still inadequate. There are examples to aid in the understanding of the process being discussed.
There is one clear, well-focused topic. The steps provide detailed information and examples to aid in the understanding of the process being discussed.
8
COHERENCE/ SEQUENCING
1
The absence of a logical order makes the paragraph difficult to read. There is no logic to the sequencing of the sentences and the paragraph is very confusing.
Many details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized.
Only some details are not in a logical order or expected order, and thus to a certain extent distracts the reader.
Details are placed in a logical order and the way they are presented effectively…